I think my answer is worthy of a level 2. It shows examples relating to various technical areas, but not in enough detail to gain a level 3. I have used some terminology but again, not enough so as to reach level 3. My main target is to analyse the technical areas in greater detail and to make greater use of terminology whilst making my points.
In this exemplar answer, there are many examples of terminology in the analysis of the text. Also, the points, despite the proficient detail, are concise enough to allow for further answers to be made about the current, and other technical areas. This is something I aim to improve in doing in future answers.
For example, in the analysis of camera shots, a lot of terminology is used and the points are concisely explained to show that they have understanding of the question. Also, the answer is written in a style that consecutively shows the various technical areas, as opposed to being in chronological order. This is good as it ensures all techinical areas have been covered as opposed to concentrating on analysing the whole clip.
A useful piece of evaluation, Liam. You definitely made improvements on your last answer.
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